feedback for our Opening Sequence.

Strengths - good editing, good placing of titles, effective use of camera angles, good use of various props costumes and special effects, good mise-en-scene.

Improvements - our main area which people commented on was the fact that our font of our titles did not fit in with mise-en-scene. however us as a group feel that the titles are well placed and fit in with the storyline.

Target Audience - an older audience of around 15+, due to the battle scenes and war zone atmosphere. another audience we feel as a group we would appeal to are people who have been affected by PTSD (post traumatic stress disorder)